(COMIC1☆13) [P-answer (Hinata Bocchi)] Tadaima Hatsujouchuu (Fate/Grand Order) [English] [EHCOVE]

Good

Men are better than women in All the ways check mate feminism.

Here's the similar doujin I am referring to: http://n.hentaiknight.work/-/g/228632/

This might be Hinata Bocchi's only work so far, and I think it's decent but kinda has its share of problems, the parts feel so segmented to each other, the sex scenes are cut off short and doesn't really feel that intense though I admit pages 9 & 10 have really nice angles and sex positions and at page 7 the artist seems to forget that Ritsuka (or who ever the fuck the guy is) is a male, http://n.hentaiknight.work/-/g/242058/7/ seriously that looks like a pussy getting fucked by Astolfo (well that's how it is drawn) this would have been better if the artist focused on one progressive scene than all these segmented parts, not that being segmented is bad though, Aichi Shiho made something similar but the way he/she utilized things really worked well, he draws things in a way that doesn't feel plain, adds more texture to make it feel more sensual something that is barely present in this one, anyways I just hope the artist improves in his/her later works and I'm giving this a 5 to 6/10.

Dem boi pussy

very nice and gay

I want to fucking murder Astolfo!

Could always use more astolfo